Bouncing up and down, the wind rushing in my face. Speeding down the hill... My blood boiling and my legs on fire. My heart beats faster and faster still, legs screaming to stop. Lungs expand like a balloon .I speed around the corner CRASH!...
We had to explain how we felt when we were running using descriptive language.
Wednesday, June 2, 2010
My Run by Josh
We are learning to write a descriptive paragraph using adjectives.
"On your mark, get set..." I murmured to myself. "Go!" I accidently said aloud. At first it was slow as I walked around the first bend, but once I got to the end of the bend, I got into it. I sped around the second bend, then around the third bend and "holy..." (a long road). The footpath was newly paved, so I had to watch out for wet concrete. As I dodged the cones, I realised that I was near the mobil station.
When I got to the mobil station, I crossed the crossing and went up main drive to the hospital. I got to a cross road, my skin saturated with sweat. I passed the hospital,my blood was boiling, but when I got to Kenepuru Drive, I knew I had finally reached my goal. Home....
"On your mark, get set..." I murmured to myself. "Go!" I accidently said aloud. At first it was slow as I walked around the first bend, but once I got to the end of the bend, I got into it. I sped around the second bend, then around the third bend and "holy..." (a long road). The footpath was newly paved, so I had to watch out for wet concrete. As I dodged the cones, I realised that I was near the mobil station.
When I got to the mobil station, I crossed the crossing and went up main drive to the hospital. I got to a cross road, my skin saturated with sweat. I passed the hospital,my blood was boiling, but when I got to Kenepuru Drive, I knew I had finally reached my goal. Home....
Cross Country by Kyle
BANG! The load sound of the starting gun starts the cross country.
I am near the back so I speed up. Sweat starts running down my face like a waterful.
My heart is pounding faster and faster, it feels like my heart is going to smash though my chest.
I'm nearly at the top of the hill, keep going I tell myself. My legs are dying. Every metre I gain towards the finsh line. my lungs are pumping as much air as they can handle. They are about to burst!!
Nearly there, I speed past people to the end.
We had to write a story about running that including lots of descriptive language.
I am near the back so I speed up. Sweat starts running down my face like a waterful.
My heart is pounding faster and faster, it feels like my heart is going to smash though my chest.
I'm nearly at the top of the hill, keep going I tell myself. My legs are dying. Every metre I gain towards the finsh line. my lungs are pumping as much air as they can handle. They are about to burst!!
Nearly there, I speed past people to the end.
We had to write a story about running that including lots of descriptive language.
CHORES by Jess
Chores! Chores! Chores!
Chores are boring! Scrubbing toilets, cleaning sinks and washing the dog takes up alot of my time and are not FUN at all.Why can't parents do that stuff? They've lived most of their lives and had their fun. Kids need to make the most of it NOW!
Parents don't know how boring chores are! These days they're as boring as watching a snail sprint 100 metres or watching a test match all day. But worst of all they take FOREVER! The only reason I do them is because I get money for doing them. When I get enough money to by a X-Box 360 I'm stopping...that is till I want to buy something else.
WALT: choose an interesting sentence to start a story and include at least 2 similes.
Chores are boring! Scrubbing toilets, cleaning sinks and washing the dog takes up alot of my time and are not FUN at all.Why can't parents do that stuff? They've lived most of their lives and had their fun. Kids need to make the most of it NOW!
Parents don't know how boring chores are! These days they're as boring as watching a snail sprint 100 metres or watching a test match all day. But worst of all they take FOREVER! The only reason I do them is because I get money for doing them. When I get enough money to by a X-Box 360 I'm stopping...that is till I want to buy something else.
WALT: choose an interesting sentence to start a story and include at least 2 similes.
Tuesday, June 1, 2010
Friday, March 26, 2010
India's scary 57 word story
I got dared so I had to do it.The skeleton was like a grey figurine.He pulled me under."Ahhhhh!"I knew that would happen,I shouldn't have picked dare.I had to stick a knife into a ghostly grave.The police found me 3 days ago.Was I dead?"Ahhhhh!"I screamed and then...
I hoped you liked my story!!!!!
Danni Tea's scary 63 word story
The wind was howling the chimes chiming , I stood there in the
dark with candle lights flickering. Looking in the mirror, getting ready to chant 6 words. The silence in the bathroom gave me the chills. Suddenly out of nowhere appeared a lady covered in fresh blood that dripped down her face. I screamed as she came after me and then...
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