BANG! The load sound of the starting gun starts the cross country.
I am near the back so I speed up. Sweat starts running down my face like a waterful.
My heart is pounding faster and faster, it feels like my heart is going to smash though my chest.
I'm nearly at the top of the hill, keep going I tell myself. My legs are dying. Every metre I gain towards the finsh line. my lungs are pumping as much air as they can handle. They are about to burst!!
Nearly there, I speed past people to the end.
We had to write a story about running that including lots of descriptive language.
this is areally cool story describing what you did at the cross country and your experiences !
ReplyDeleteNice kyle very descriptive use of language
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