My Run by Josh

We are learning to write a descriptive paragraph using adjectives.

"On your mark, get set..." I murmured to myself. "Go!" I accidently said aloud. At first it was slow as I walked around the first bend, but once I got to the end of the bend, I got into it. I sped around the second bend, then around the third bend and "holy..." (a long road). The footpath was newly paved, so I had to watch out for wet concrete. As I dodged the cones, I realised that I was near the mobil station.

When I got to the mobil station, I crossed the crossing and went up main drive to the hospital. I got to a cross road, my skin saturated with sweat. I passed the hospital,my blood was boiling, but when I got to Kenepuru Drive, I knew I had finally reached my goal. Home....